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"One day, Mario saw a mushroom on the floor and he immediately ate it without a doubt. Then Mario's body didn't get fatter but bombed and he died. Timor hiding beside said:" the fucking plumber finally died by my poisonous mushroom in revenge for my stolen mushrooms during these years. Imao."



I'd like you to correct it if there are grammatical mistakes. And make it sounds more fun, especially Timor's feeling. Thanks in advance.









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    "One day, Mario saw a mushroom on the floor and he immediately ate it without a doubt. Then Mario's body didn't get fatter but bombed and he died. Timor hiding beside said:" the fucking plumber finally died by my poisonous mushroom in revenge for my stolen mushrooms during these years. Imao."



    I'd like you to correct it if there are grammatical mistakes. And make it sounds more fun, especially Timor's feeling. Thanks in advance.









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      "One day, Mario saw a mushroom on the floor and he immediately ate it without a doubt. Then Mario's body didn't get fatter but bombed and he died. Timor hiding beside said:" the fucking plumber finally died by my poisonous mushroom in revenge for my stolen mushrooms during these years. Imao."



      I'd like you to correct it if there are grammatical mistakes. And make it sounds more fun, especially Timor's feeling. Thanks in advance.









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      "One day, Mario saw a mushroom on the floor and he immediately ate it without a doubt. Then Mario's body didn't get fatter but bombed and he died. Timor hiding beside said:" the fucking plumber finally died by my poisonous mushroom in revenge for my stolen mushrooms during these years. Imao."



      I'd like you to correct it if there are grammatical mistakes. And make it sounds more fun, especially Timor's feeling. Thanks in advance.







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