Help with sentence construction
The rhetoric being deployed here reveals the emptiness of social titles. When faced with a rational argument regarding his sins Clarence counters by suggesting that the image of a begging noble should illicit pity by mere virtue of existence. The murderers rightfully respond by taking his life. A movement in the narrative that seems purposeful, as after a gruelling conversation about guilt, conscience, and morality Clarence reveals the fraudulent ideology that keeps the nobility afloat. We might interpret this attack as directed at such ideological structures.
Can anyone help me figure out what changes I should make, Im not sure if there are any syntactical or grammatical mistakes.
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The rhetoric being deployed here reveals the emptiness of social titles. When faced with a rational argument regarding his sins Clarence counters by suggesting that the image of a begging noble should illicit pity by mere virtue of existence. The murderers rightfully respond by taking his life. A movement in the narrative that seems purposeful, as after a gruelling conversation about guilt, conscience, and morality Clarence reveals the fraudulent ideology that keeps the nobility afloat. We might interpret this attack as directed at such ideological structures.
Can anyone help me figure out what changes I should make, Im not sure if there are any syntactical or grammatical mistakes.
grammar syntax
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The rhetoric being deployed here reveals the emptiness of social titles. When faced with a rational argument regarding his sins Clarence counters by suggesting that the image of a begging noble should illicit pity by mere virtue of existence. The murderers rightfully respond by taking his life. A movement in the narrative that seems purposeful, as after a gruelling conversation about guilt, conscience, and morality Clarence reveals the fraudulent ideology that keeps the nobility afloat. We might interpret this attack as directed at such ideological structures.
Can anyone help me figure out what changes I should make, Im not sure if there are any syntactical or grammatical mistakes.
grammar syntax
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The rhetoric being deployed here reveals the emptiness of social titles. When faced with a rational argument regarding his sins Clarence counters by suggesting that the image of a begging noble should illicit pity by mere virtue of existence. The murderers rightfully respond by taking his life. A movement in the narrative that seems purposeful, as after a gruelling conversation about guilt, conscience, and morality Clarence reveals the fraudulent ideology that keeps the nobility afloat. We might interpret this attack as directed at such ideological structures.
Can anyone help me figure out what changes I should make, Im not sure if there are any syntactical or grammatical mistakes.
grammar syntax
grammar syntax
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